I have written a few poems and you can see them at www.poetry.com
One of them called 'Place Within' is going to appear in a book with work by other amateur poets. Granted the book is only a coffee table edition but i still derive a sense of achievement from this.
I use to write poetry a few years ago and then stopped for a while.
Dont expect anything fantastic (im sure you dont 😛 )
If your interested look under: Rachael Tierney. 'Place within' is the best as the others are quite poo but im working on it so dont be harsh should you read them.
My favorite is "The Work" (though I think you've got a "thou" vs. "thy" issue or some-such) -- but it's one I wouldn't mind memorizing!
Thanks for the heads-up on poetry.com too. It looks like a fun thing to get involved in.
I know what you mean about the errors 😳 and i do apologise as i should be checking them more thoroughly (get caught in the the moment 😛 )
Always best to get caught in the moment!
Keep on truckin'...